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WWW:
- You've made some progress here and in Q1+Q3 it's clear you've revised some of the terminology and theory.
EBI:
- Written English is a problem: some of your sentences do not make sense or are hard to follow.
- Revise public service broadcasting.
- In Q3 you need to look at both sides of the argument. You also need to be far more critical and sophisticated- an A level Media student shouldn't be blaming everything or the media like a Daily Mail editorial.
2) Read the mark scheme for this assessment carefully. Identify at least one potential point that you missed out on for each question in the assessment.
QUESTION 1- Could have given one more strategy and explain them more in detail.
QUESTION 2- I could have revised more about understanding the context of BBC. I got mixed up with the context of BBC.
QUESTION 3- I missed out on applying it to the theory which i should start to practice more on.
3) On a scale of 1-10 (1 = low, 10 = high), how much revision and preparation did you do for this assessment?
6 I did revise but i could have revised more efficiently.
4) Look at your answer for Question 1. Did you manage to write about three different strategies and three different benefits? It's vital you read the question and follow it exactly.
I did manage to write about two strategies but i missed on one other point. I could have explained one of the strategies a little bit more to get more marks.5) Look at your answer for Question 2. Did you follow the question guidance and write about both the BBC and commercial broadcasters? What could you have added to this answer to reach a higher mark?
I did not quite talk about the commercial broadcasting which i could have a lot more. I need to do my research more on the context of BBC.6) Now look over your mark, teacher comments and the mark scheme for Question 3 - the 20 mark essay question on media effects theory. Write a new paragraph for this question based on the suggested theories/answers in the mark scheme. Make sure it is an extensive, detailed paragraph focused on the question and offering examples from the wider media.
How far do you agree with the view that the media has a damaging effect on audiences?
You should refer to Gerbner’s cultivation theory alongside other media effects theories you have
studied.
[20 marks]
Media does have an effect on the media this could be proven through news. There was a shooting at a school in America the teenager that murdered so many children apparently watched a lot of video games that had explicit and violent scenes. Some people assumed it is is because of that the shooting happened because he was influenced to do that. If we were to link this to Cultivation theory Gerbner suggests in his cultivation theory is that when you watching something for a long period that has an effect and would influence you. It could harm the audience's mind if they watch things such as violence and inappropriate content.